User talk:Allykwong/Bellevue Botanical Garden

I have left you a peer review, looks good so far! Madross15 (talk) 20:59, 31 January 2020 (UTC)Madross15

Feedback on your article

@Allykwong: You've obvious done a lot to improve this article, add references, and so on. Thanks for all your hard work on that! One thing I noticed is that a bunch of the wiki-links (i.e., links to other Wikipedia articles, especially abou8t plans) seem to have been lost or removed in the editting. You should think about adding back a number of links to other pages. Those help people find out more information about related topics and things mentioned in this article.

Other than that, you should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. I've gone through and made a few edits to your articles to clean things up—mostly tiny stylistic things but there are definitely more like that. Look at the history to see what I've done before you move it over.

Do a final pass and try to address the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then once you're confident, go ahead and make it live. Good luck! —mako๛ 03:07, 14 February 2020 (UTC)