Alexis mumford
Joined 27 January 2015
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Jbdolphin in topic A brownie for you!
A cupcake for you!
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Good start, Alexis! Suggestions include developing a more formal abstract, and an annotated bibliography--some of which you have currently incorporated in your abstract. Jbdolphin (talk) 18:26, 10 March 2015 (UTC) |
Alexis
I found the article you chose very interesting. I also checked the wikipedia page on the subject and it seemed to be seriously lacking some information. I think the work you're planning on doing for the subject will prove to be very useful. I had no idea what Imago Therapy was until I read up on it, and expanding the wikipedia article will bring more insight to the general public. My advice would be to find more research. You have a few great sources, but you could always use more for more clarity and information. If my memory serves me right, the school has a huge psych department, you could always go to them for more information on your subject. Wish you the best.
A brownie for you!
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Nice improvements, Alexis. For future improvements, you will want to be careful not to be advocating one way or another about Imago therapy. Only offer what has been substantiated. In terms of your entry's relationship to the class, what ethical issues are involved? Let's be sure to discuss this more as you refine your focus. Jbdolphin (talk) 02:00, 20 March 2015 (UTC) |