User talk:Aleon014/sandbox
I am showing Akel how this works. Kisgro (talk) 20:56, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
Peer Review and Responses
edit- I really enjoyed what you have done with this topic! I did not know much about it clicking on your name, but I now have a better understanding of what commercial art is! Kmeneghin (talk) 21:48, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- I really like what you have done thus far.
- I like the topic you chose Kotomi1996 (talk) 20:26, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
- What I am most looking forward to learning about your article is the consumerism! I know how much commercial art has been throughout history and it will be interesting to see how much the consumerism was/is affected by this commercial art! Go Amanda!!! Brinleiching (talk) 23:22, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
- The original article definitely doesn't have total balance. The last two paragraphs about commercial art and artists can be added to. Overall, this is a great article, to add to. And since you're interested in it, I'm excited to see what your changes are.Amitc008 (talk) 16:39, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
- I love how you added Andy Warhol in there! I think he's a great artist to talk about because not many people know about him. It was very clear and short which is good. Some suggestions would be maybe adding a short section of Andy Warhol stating specifically why he did artwork like that and perhaps adding a picture of one of his famous artworks. Looking forward to seeing your additions to commercial art!Glafl002 (talk) 19:25, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for your responses Amitc008 and Glafl002! I have reconstructed the original article to ensure that the content is well balanced. I'll also link Andy Warhol and pop art in my "Consumerism within Commercial Art" section rather than making a section on his work. Aleon014 (talk) 23:05, 28 April 2018 (UTC)
I love the picture of by Andy Warhol that you incorporated. I think it really makes the article stand out more and gives more of a "pop" feeling! I also liked how you linked many articles to your statement. It shows a collaboration of information you have added in order to create this well written paragraph about commercialism. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glafl002 (talk • contribs) 18:24, 2 May 2018 (UTC)