User talk:Ajtantico/Friends (Omar Apollo EP)

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Benjamin Mako Hill in topic Feedback on your article

Heyyyyyy Here is a link to my peer review: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajtantico/Friends_(Omar_Apollo_EP)/NK560_Peer_Review

<3 NK560 (talk) 03:35, 3 February 2020 (UTC)Reply

Feedback on your article

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@Ajtantico: The very short version is that your article looks great. Good work on this.

The more complicated part of the story is that the original article seems to have been deleted since you moved things over into your Sandbox. There were a number of problems with the original article including that it had almost no content and that it did not establish the notability of the subject as per the WP:NMUSIC policy. I think that your improved article addresses the issues so you can move it back over and re-create it.

When you do so, you should definitely provide a rationale for why you are recreating it and you should explain that the article is fixed in many ways. Since this is basically Wikipedia on "advanced mode" I'm happy to help you through this. Do you want to try to find some time to talk with me today? I'm around my lab all day today or I can take a minute this weekend. You can find my contact information online if you want. —mako 21:33, 14 February 2020 (UTC)Reply

A quick followup. You should take a look at this list of suggestions for polishing your article which is a helpful set of ideas from altsalt. Many won't apply but some might. In any case, do a final pass and try to address any of the things on the list on our website that you think are useful and would improve things. Then go ahead and make it live. —mako 21:33, 14 February 2020 (UTC)Reply