User talk:Ahd3100/sandbox/articledraft
Comments on Article Draft
editOverall, I believe that all the information that was added to the article was helpful and relevant to the article topic. You are correct in assuming that some of the terminology used in the article is highly specific vocabulary to guitarists and musicians and added and expanding upon the hyperlinks to words would be very useful for the diverse traffic of the website. I have not read the unedited paragraphs of the page but I suggest looking for terms that do not seem self explanatory. The edits that add context to the history of the Fender Telecaster like adding information about various smaller production changes are well worded. Of the article that I have read, because it is an in depth page, the grammar and spelling seems correct. The sources provided also appear to be trustworthy. It was decently organized although the article could use more information on sales and the financial data to give a fuller picture of the reception of this guitar.