User talk:Aaph/Forsen

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

One area of improvement for this article will be to shift towards a more encyclopedic tone and to upgrade the reliability of your sources. I notice that a lot of them are promotional in tone. The good news is that there is a Wikiproject for Video Games and those folks have done a lot of work to think about which sources are a good match for Wikipedia -- check out the list at [[1]]. You can search each one for a reliability assessment.

Also, you don't need to keep (and won't want to keep....) the headers that were provided by the wikiedu template (lead, body, etc.). Go ahead and pull those out and use the real headers the article needs.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 08:06, 26 January 2022 (UTC)

feedback on progress

This is looking good, @Aaph: -- the biggest challenge will be sources. We talked about both Academic sources and some places to find guides to good sources -- all good progress. This is getting close.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:47, 12 February 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

You are approved to go live with this article.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 22:23, 12 February 2022 (UTC)