A few stylistic points:
- "Bose received an Anglocentric education"
- "In 1921 in order to join"
- "Bose was held by the Bengal government over a protest under house-arrest"
- "he
valorouslyescaped" - "with Adolf Hitler who offered to arrange"
- "
But having got no tangible support, through waterways he left for Japanese-held Sumatra" -> "Having received no tangible support he left for Japanese-held Sumatra by submarine", but even then I'm not too happy with the repeated "submarine". - "However impressed the Japanese were by"
- I'm also not to happy with "has been theorised by some into a conspiracy but factually unfounded" but will think about that.
Please, feel free to disregard these corrections if you disagree. I am seriously trying to be helpful and not critical. Regards Martin of Sheffield (talk) 15:20, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you and I have changed them exactly like you pointed except for two. I have kept 6th as it is because of the same reason that is the repeated "submarine"; "waterways" seemed good to me but if some of us find a better one, that should be added. I have kept the 8th one same for the same reason as you that is I am yet to come up with a better one. Appu (talk) 10:27, 12 January 2022 (UTC)