User talk:A5phan/Anti-sweatshop movement

Latest comment: 7 months ago by A5phan in topic Changes that I made

Changes that I made

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Hello,

I have made various changes to this article. On the talk page of the article, it mentioned that the lead section needs to be longer and to summarize the key points. It also mentioned that it needs more citations.

Therefore, the changes that I added are:

- an image with description

- sentences in the lead section that talk more about key points

- an additional citation about the anti-sweatshop movement (linked it to a sentence and added it to the references section)

- more sentences in the body to clarify some ideas A5phan (talk) 18:35, 30 November 2023 (UTC)Reply