User talk:8isfate/3racha Sandbox subpage

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Reagle

Review

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Excellent start! I made a few edits (see your page's history). When you've addressed my suggestions, please proceed according to the directions in the syllabus.

  • moving citations after terminating periods
  • finish references and fix those showing red text
  • explain what is meant by "training"
  • move to mainspace
  • once it's live, make sure it's not a Wikipedia:Orphan
  • and add categories then too
  • maybe a photo (?)

-Reagle (talk) 18:08, 22 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the edits; I did some tweaks. I'm not sure what is going on with citations 53--56? -Reagle (talk) 12:08, 23 October 2020 (UTC)Reply