Hi, I have never done this before so sorry if I violate any guidelines. I thought I would act first while I have time and energy.  :: )) You undid my edits for inaccuracy but accuracy isn't the problem. Maybe my writing was, I don't know. Unless you were involved with the production, maybe you don't remember but the first thing Everett comes upon when they stop in the woods is some ashes and burnt branches. He kneels down and inspects them. Everything in cinema is significant. They find ashes. The end shot is the tape recorder and ashes are piled up around it. Perhaps the way I added the information was presumptive. I will review the final scene. Then I will review talk guidelines. Over and out.  : )