Reversion of my edit on Sharron Davies

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Hello,

You reverted my edit stating: "Undid revert of previous edit, back to neutral language. If this is established fact, it should be properly referenced. A citation needed tag would not be clear in this instance, so I have undone the revert. Please discuss on the Talk page or provide proper sourcing before reverting it again"

I believe my point with the edit may have been lost. I believe the old wording (which you reverted back to) is non-neutral, and I was trying to add neutrality.

I do see your point however, as my new wording wasn't neutral either.

I'm going to edit again, and have expanded on my thoughts at Talk:Sharron Davies.

Thanks,

Frazzydee| 06:01, 27 April 2023 (UTC)Reply