User talk:19dakota19/Mangareva Language

Final Review

Hi Dakota, this is my feedback for your final project. The 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:

1. Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar. I made some minor proofreading changes. 4 points.
2. Structure: The structure does not follow the suggested template and the information presented could benefit from reorganization. 3 points.
3. Balance: At present, the article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
4. Accuracy: It is difficult to judge the accuracy of the article because most claims are unsourced. The few citations that are made often link to sources that have not benefited from peer review. 1 point.
5. Relevance: Not all of the information is relevant, and there appears to be some fluff. 4 points.
6. Length: Word count 1182/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 3 points.

The final score is 20/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 18:02, 11 May 2021 (UTC)

Final Review - Revision

Hi Dakota, this is my feedback for your final project. The 6 points on which I'm grading you are Language, Structure, Balance, Accuracy, Relevance, and Length. Here are my assessments on each of those areas:

1. Language: On the whole, the article employs proper English spelling and grammar. I made some minor proofreading changes. 4 points.
2. Structure: The structure does not follow the suggested template and the information presented could benefit from reorganization. 3 points.
3. Balance: At present, the article appears to reflect a neutral point of view. 5 points.
4. Accuracy: Most of the claims are backed with references to a mixture of high quality scholarly sources and some internet information. 4 points.
5. Relevance: Not all of the information is relevant, and there appears to be some fluff. 4 points.
6. Length: Word count 1182/2000 (including headers but not bibliography). 3 points.

The final score is 23/30. Have a great summer! Chuck Haberl (talk) 22:33, 12 May 2021 (UTC)