Feedback from MJackson53
Abstract I think this section is a good start. The third paragraph seems a bit more challenging to understand and could be more lay readable.
Mechanism Don’t forget to include this section in your final draft.
Symptoms Maybe you can describe each of the clinical signs more. What kind of behavioral and personality changes are seen?
Diagnosis Describe each exam you mentioned. How do you define poor scoring on each exam? I like the example you gave in the last paragraph. Also, I like that you have a separate section for imaging. Perhaps you can fuse this section with the Diagnosis section.
Cause and Prevention Don’t forget to include this section in your final draft. Maybe you can fuse the genetics section with this section.
Treatment and Prognosis Maybe you can describe what these pathologies are. Are there any medications, therapies, or surgeries that can be used to treat SD patients?
Recent Research Make sure to talk about what recent research there is about SD.
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