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Batter (walls)

There is very minimal information provided on this page about the batter wall. As an architectural term, the definition as currently employed in the page does not come from any architectural source. The definition of the term as currently presented is also a little ambiguous and the sentences aren't well-structured. Although the article stated that batter walls may be used for structural purposes, it doesn't go in depth to discuss what the structural characteristics are and why they may be used for particular reasons related to material, site, or climatic and environmental conditions. There is also a lack of discussion on cultural context for the examples mentions that explore why particular regions or culture were interested in using batter walls. There are also no citations provided for the these examples and also no citations are found for the images in the gallery section. The term "batter" was also used as an noun and a verb interchangeably, which was not clearly stated in the initial definition. The overall tone of the article is neutral, but yet not very informative.