User:Wentl015/Jacob Tobia/Conra278 Peer Review

Peer review

General info

• Whose work are you reviewing? (Alicesonbegaye)
• Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Alicesonbegaye/sandbox

Lead evaluation

Lead is changed accurately recognize Tobia's pronouns.

Content evaluation

New content from 2018 and 2019 is added for up-to-date activities in Tobia's life.

Tone and balance evaluation

Tone is very neutral.

Organization evaluation

Organization is good. New content is added to appropriate sections within the article.

Overall evaluation

New content is up-to-date and any edits made only make the article more relevant. New content is good.