User:Sasharoach/User:Isdewell/Towpath Cafe (London)/Sasharoach Peer Review

General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Isdewell

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Isdewell/Towpath Cafe (London)
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Lead

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Guiding questions:

  • The lead has been updated to reflect the new content
  • The lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic
  • The lead includes a brief description of the article's major sections
  • The lead does not include information that is not present in the article
  • The lead is concise and not overly detailed

Content

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Guiding questions:

  • The content added is relevant to the topic
  • The content added is up-to-date
  • There is no content that is missing or content that does not belong
  • The article does not deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps or addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics

Tone and Balance

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Guiding questions:

  • The content added is neutral
  • There are no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position
  • There are not viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented
  • The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another

Sources and References

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Guiding questions:

  • All new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information
  • The content accurately reflects what the cited sources say
  • The sources are thorough - i.e. they reflect the available literature on the topic
  • The sources are current
  • The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors and include historically marginalized individuals where possible- though only two sources
  • There are not better sources available- the book provides comprehensive information and touches on all subjects related to the cafe
  • Links work

Organization

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Guiding questions:

  • Content added is well-written - i.e. It is concise, clear, and easy to read
  • The content added does not contain grammatical or spelling errors
  • The content added is well-organized - i.e It is broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic

Images and Media

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Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

  • The article does not include images that enhance understanding of the topic
  • Images are not well captioned- no images
  • Images do not adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations- no images
  • Images are not laid out in a visual way- no images

For New Articles Only

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If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

  • The article meets Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. It is supported by 2 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject
  • The list of sources is not greatly exhaustive- there are only two, however the book is the best source for this topic and contains an influx of information
  • The article follows the patterns of other similar articles
  • The article links to other articles

Overall impressions

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Guiding questions:

  • The content added has made it more complete- especially since this is a new article so all content is new on Wikipedia
  • Strengths: Organized, thorough, links to other articles and sources
  • Content can be improved by adding images to make it more interesting and visually appealing