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"Amor Prohibido" (English: Forbidden Love) is a song by Mexican-American Tejano pop singer Selena. Amor Prohibido was the lead single released from her album of the same name (1994). The song was written and produced by Jorge Alberto Pino, Bebu Silvetti, A.B. Quintanilla, José Behar, Pete Astudillo and Abraham Quintanilla, Jr., and was arranged by Joe Ojeda and Chris Pérez.[1] It was released in the United States for the Tejano and rhythmic contemporary radios. The song describes a relationship, the story of love between a man and a women who are tested with their love, poverty, differences, and are even dealt with their parents who disapprove of their relationship.

The song, widely known as her signature song, won both the Premio Lo Nuestro Awards for "Pop Ballad of the Year" and was awarded "Regional Mexican Song of the Year" for three consecutive years[2]. While at the Tejano Music Awards, the single led Selena to win all nominated work for the album "Amor Prohibido"[3]. The success of the album and the single's airplay helped Selena to be nominated for a Grammy Award for "Best Mexican-American Performance"[4]. During the 1996 Tejano Music Awards, Selena won "Single of the Year" for the song[4]. "Amor Prohibido" also won the "Latin Pop Award" during the Broadcast Music Incorporated Awards in 1995[5] and won the "Billboard Latin Music Awards" in 1996[6][7].

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Condense Para 2 and 3, and move extra content to Critical Reception

Ok, I think that the "extra content" is already in the article so removing or triming the lead more would be best rather than adding information thats already in the article. What do you think? AJona1992 (talk) 01:56, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Perfect. The lede only needs to summarize and convey notablility. Perhaps, trim para 2 and 3 to something akin to my suggestion (just para 2), then move anything else that's not already in the article from those paragraphs down to the "Critical Response" section.
Then, maybe add a line or two to para 2, if you see fit? Anyway, that's all I have at the moment. Do you have chat, or do you prefer using the talk pages? ROBERTMFROMLI TALK/CNTRB 01:58, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
What do you mean by "chat"? AJona1992 (talk) 01:59, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
There's an IRC channel for Wikipedia, there's AIM, and stuff like Google Chat. ROBERTMFROMLI TALK/CNTRB 02:03, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Oh lolz I have AIM. I sent you a message via there as well. AJona1992 (talk) 02:05, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Weird, didnt come through... send another? OceanBreezes231 ROBERTMFROMLI TALK/CNTRB 02:07, 21 September 2010 (UTC)

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The song, widely known as her signature song, won both the Premio Lo Nuestro Awards for "Pop Ballad of the Year" and was awarded "Regional Mexican Song of the Year" for three consecutive years[2]. While at the Tejano Music Awards, the single led Selena to win all nominated work for the album "Amor Prohibido"[3]. The success of the album and the single's airplay helped Selena to be nominated for a Grammy Award for "Best Mexican-American Performance"[4]. During the 1996 Tejano Music Awards, Selena won "Single of the Year" for the song[4]. "Amor Prohibido" gained popularity for its different sound in Tejano, which is in contrast to her earlier Tejano, urban, and Latin releases"[8].

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I think this should be in this section rather than the lead.

Selena was named "top Latin artist of the '90s" and "Best selling Latin artist of the decade" by Billboard, due to her fourteen top-ten singles in the Top Latin Songs chart, including "Amor Prohibido".[9] Selena also had the most successful singles of 1994 and 1995, with "Amor Prohibido" and "No Me Queda Más".[10].

Sounds good! ROBERTMFROMLI TALK/CNTRB 02:06, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
Ok I removed it. How does the lead looks now, do you think its reasonable or trim it more? AJona1992 (talk) 02:08, 21 September 2010 (UTC)
I think it's reasonable. Looks good to me. ROBERTMFROMLI TALK/CNTRB 02:31, 21 September 2010 (UTC)


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With "Amor Prohibido" and thirteen other of Selena's top-ten singles in the Top Latin Songs chart, she was named "top Latin artist of the '90s" and "Best selling Latin artist of the decade" by Billboard.[9]

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The single topped the Hot Latin Tracks Chart.[11] It peaked #1 in the United States while the song peaked #5 in Mexico. Selena was named "top Latin artist of the '90s" and "Best selling Latin artist of the decade" by Billboard, due to her fourteen top-ten singles in the Top Latin Songs chart, including "Amor Prohibido".[9] Selena also had the most successful singles of 1994 and 1995, with "Amor Prohibido" and "No Me Queda Más".[10]. "Amor Prohibido" also won the "Latin Pop Award" during the Broadcast Music Incorporated Awards in 1995[5] and won the "Billboard Latin Music Awards" in 1996[6][7].

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  1. ^ "Album Credits". Barnes & Noble. 2010-08-23. Retrieved 2010-08-23.
  2. ^ a b "Amor Prohibido awarded "Pop Ballad of the Year" and "Regional Mexican Song of The Year" by Lo Nuestro". Univision. 2010-08-25. Retrieved 2010-08-25.
  3. ^ a b "Tejano Music Awards Past Award Winners". TejanoMusicAwards.com. 2010-08-23. Retrieved 2010-08-23.
  4. ^ a b c d "Past Nominations and Winners of the 36th Annual Grammy Awards". Rockonthenet.com. 2010-08-23. Retrieved 2010-08-23.
  5. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference BMI Music Awards was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  6. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference BMI was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  7. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference BMI Music was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
  8. ^ "Barnes & Noble's reviews of Amor Prohibido". Barnesandnoble.com. 2010-08-23. Retrieved 2010-08-23.
  9. ^ a b c Mayfield, Geoff (1999-12-25). "Totally '90s: Diary of a Decade". Billboard. 111 (52). Nielsen Business Media, Inc.: YE-16–18. ISSN 0006-2510. Retrieved 2010-03-30. Cite error: The named reference "selena" was defined multiple times with different content (see the help page).
  10. ^ a b "Topping The Charts Year By Year". Billboard. 110 (48). Nielsen Business Media, Inc: LMQ3. 1998-11-28. Retrieved 2010-03-03.
  11. ^ "Top Latin Songs, Latin Music & Popular Latin Music Charts". Billboard.com. 2010-08-23. Retrieved 2010-08-23.
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