My name is Ricky Hoffman, I am a high school senior enrolled in running start through Everett Community College, in Everett, WA. I have a strong passion for theatre. I have been in four shows performed with the Marysville Pilchuck Highschool Drama Club. The first show I performed in was Game of Tiaras, written by Don Zolidis. I was cast as The French Prince. My first Musical was The Little Mermaid, from Disney, cast as Chef Louis. Then, I was cast as the Mad Hatter from Alice in Wonderland. I am currently working on my role as Lord Farquaad in Shrek the musical.
Article Critique edit
I visited the Christopher Sieber page on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: Citations, Structure/completeness, and age.
Citations edit
I noticed very few citations, to be exact only 14. With an article containing as much information as this one has, I was really expecting there to be a lot more. However, of the few references, all of the links worked and they all seem to be from a trusted website. Also, most of the facts within the article have no citation leading me to believe they may not be one hundred percent accurate.
Structure/completeness edit
Reading this article I noticed the authors mainly focused on his career. They had paragraphs about his career, but one small section for his personal life which barely even had any personal information. I would have liked to see more information about him specifically because I already know most of his roles and attributions/ roles with theater. Exapnsion on early life, and personal life would be ideal.
Age edit
This page seems to get updated every now and then. The last edit was made on January 5th, 2017. However, all of the links and references were mostly from 2011 if not older. That being said, this page could use some updates on their facts and citations.
Summary edit
I would say this article is pretty reliable if you need information about what roles Christopher Sieber has played. Basically any other inquiries would still be left unanswered. I would like to see more information supported by updated references, and more details on his personal life.
Talk:Christopher Sieber#More personal life .2F early life talk page
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