Is each fact referenced with appropriate and reliable reference?
Introduction explaining personal information and background is lacking any reference. Link for reference number two on list of references does not work. As well in the outline of his junior career the references given for the whole paragraph do not contain all the information in the paragraph. There for more citations are needed.
Is there any points that are over represented or under represented?
His personal life and what he does outside of sport is under represented. His community involvements such as being involved in suicide prevention workshops for indigenous youth, is not included even though a substantial contribution to his community. [1]. Personal life sections and outlining athletes accomplishments outside of sport is important to really giving a good picture of who they are. A personal life section needs to be added to allow for a holistic view of this athlete.
Is information out of date? Anything missing that could be added?
The information only goes up to 2009, quick research can find that he is in fact still in the sport and has made some substantial achievements recently. Missing is his actual tribe as it is a group of tribes that make up the lroquois, he is and identifies as Mohawk[2]. More up to date information needs to be added to his profile, and his heritage correctly described.
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- ^ Sharkey, Jackie. "The Athlete: Cody Jamieson". CBC. Retrieved 8 March 2017.
- ^ Sharkey, Jackie. "The Athlete: Cody Jamieson". CBC. Retrieved 8 March 2017.