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I was the one who expanded the article, in Spanish, of the Childlike Empress. When I wasn't a member of Wikipedia I found out that the article was poor, so I decided to translate the "Attributes" section to Spanish.
I also corrected a minimal part of Christopher Paolini's Bio.
I wrote a complete summary of the movie "Return to Oz" (placed in the bottom, without corrections, of course...)which I corrected after seeing 234 times the movie during my whole life since i was born. Someone thought that it was about the book but it was far off from the books in which this movie was based, anyway, my summary was deleted and the ones in charge decided that my summary was wrong, even though I had already seen it like 300 times that movie, and actually, know in memory the whole script.
I tried to translate the "Book 3 (Inheritance Trilogy)" section to Spanish. I found out that it was already translated but the translation was horrible, the conjunctions meanings and official names in Spanish where all wrong. So again I took the bother of make some adjustments. But oh surprise, the next day (June 25th of 2007) I found out that the original script was pasted again, so I decided to correct it again and then said. "I hate when Wikipiedia dislikes my well done corrections, I'm feed up, and I cannot stand it anymore... I will make an account." And so I made my account on Wikipedia, so my works would be at least be counted as real.

Beeing memeber of Wikipedia edit

I expanded the article of Ultimate Muscle by adding the Introduction and Tournaments section onto the Spanish Wikipedia. In other words, I translated those sections.
In June 26th of 2007 I expanded a little bit more the article in Spanish of The Childlike Empress (Empreratriz Infantil).
In July 16th of 2007 I took the bother in creating the new Spanish Wikipedia article of Curdy y la Cámara de los Lores (Curdy and the chamber of the lords) which didn't existed 'till I decided to create it. I placed a brief summary and a small paragraph of info.
In July 23th of 2007, after finishing Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows (which is awesome, you've got to read it), I enter and expanded the section of Eldest In the Spanish Wikipedia, also created the New article of Magia (El Legado), 'cause the Ancient Language section in Spanish didn't even exist....
In July 29th of 2007 I created the article "The Twelve Kingdoms: Sea of Shadow", the first volume of the eleven-book novel The Twelve kingdoms, written by Fuyumi Ono. also bothered to make a meticulosly planned summary of the book. In May 25th of 2008 I saw that someone requested the summary to be reduced, so I took the bother and deleted minor things, even though I still think that people should obtain a full summary, even though that might stop peole form reading it, since actually is a trouble, beacuse people who don't read are far worse that peolpe who read... any way.
I don't recall the date, but was in August of 2007. I expanded a little bit the article of Alagaesia in the Spanish Wikipedia, because, as I had found out, the articles in Spanish Wikipedia are poorly made and explain things in a vague and lonely way that make them see mediocre. I actually think that the English Wikipedia is more complete.
I created the article The Twelve Kingdoms: Sea of Wind.
In April 2nd of 2008, once again, denoting the incompetence of Spanish Wikipedia, I created the article of La ciudad de los libros soñadores (The City of Dreaming Books), by Walter Mowers. Providing a complete summary and info. about the book.

About what articles I've done had been erased edit

It's not that someone had deleted it all, but, certainly in "The Twelve Kingdoms: Sea of Shadow" article some guys who actually only saw the anime but never read the book, decided to erase some stuffs that actually are good to know about it. Certainly no one ‘till now has ever dared to erase parts of the plot (but me, jeje, just to cut it a little). Anyway, I let them to do whatever they want, it was I who read the book anyway, and as they say: the book is always better.

On December the 5fth I bothered in creating the article of Libro 4 (saga el Legado) on the Spanish Wikipedia, which had no existence, but somebody thought that it was useless to have it and deleted it as if it didn't mattered to exist. Its okay that I hate Eragon, but I think that at least bad books should have their space too, don't you think?

also, I must add that the Spanish Wikipedia is a total fraud and disapointment!!!!

One day on this year, I don't rmeember the month. One person wasn't happy with the LONG SUMMARY of The Twelve Kingdoms: Sea of shadow. So he or she delted it and placed a raquitical paraghraph of it. I mean, instead of placing somehtign like CHARACTERS or TRIVIA he deletes it!!! What kind of people are you!!!?

Books that suck and I higly recomend you not to read edit

Eldest

JAJAJA, Do you thought I wouldn't mention it? Well now I do. It was the most repulsing, boring, predictable and pointless book I’ve ever read in my whole life. I thought that perhaps would be worth reading the second part, so perhaps the story would get good. But I got bored and tired of reading about characters that are not worth to mention, I daresay that Christopher Paolini only wrote and wrote and never realized that he was getting nowhere with all those stuff. And to be honest, Brisingr and its next unnamed book are only a greedy business to gain more money from fans :b. Honestly, Christopher would have deleted some parts of the book in order to keep his so famous trilogy, a good writer must be willing to tear apart his whole story if that’s what is needed, anything out of point must be removed! A true writer will always be willing to start from the scratch and re-prepare his story if he sees that the story is not good! But no! He extended even more to fix the horrible and idiotic things he had created when writing the draft of eldest (by the way, this includes Eragon too).

Endymion Srping

Yawn* really boring, I didn't even finished it, I thought that at certain point the story would turn exciting and all those stuff (also I read it because I wanted to know what children are reading these days), but to my surprise the story only got more and more boring. In the ending I threw it to the bookshelf, in the sections of "books never ever worth to be read again in my whole life (or even finish them)".

The alchemist: the secrets of the immortal Nicholas Flamel

Oh my gosh, it was so boring, predictable and so, so, so inconsistent. The main character didn’t even take the time to believe what they were doing, and everything just happened out of nowhere (why did I guessed that Nick Fleming was Nicholas Flamel???? I wonder???). I disliked his whole history of the Elder Races and all those things of Egyptians and yada yada. Also his nonsense prophesy and the overfried thing about "the seventh daughter of a seventh daughter". I mean, I accepted it when reading The Spok's by Joseph Delany, but for The Alchemist, The Dark is Rising, Septimus Heap series and every other book about seven times seven??? More originality please!!! Why not the first son of the first son, whose only power is unique and don't depend form a lucky number to have strength???

Narnia books: Prince Caspian, The voyages of the dawn trader and the magician’s nephew

One word of warning: BORING! I got totally bored bout them, they started okay but as time flowed the story only led to nowhere. Prince Caspian was the one who deserved the big burning, since I stopped reading it 10 pages before ending and threw it away, for the Aslan´s rescue got me tired.

Artemis Foul: the opal deception

Why in earth I guessed that Opal made it to escape? Was it I read the end when I was 25 pages before ending it? Was it perhaps that the story itself led to it? Or, was I able to unlock the "secret" message on the bottom foot of the book pages???? One thing is for sure, I never finished the book, got me tired of such technology combined with fairies and trolls. Never imagined that could exist people so smart, but that lacked the gift to make a thrilling good written story.

Bloodring, Seraphs & Host

These books are a complete piece of bad work, none of them reaching a good story enough to grip you from the beginning, though I liked the idea of two gay men within the party of the heroine jaja. Anyway, Faith Hunter has placed herself in my list of bad writers *cough* (those who write for money and think that their stories are absolutely great, and worst of all those editors and agents that fall in their trap too). Only if you want to read about blood gore and endless battles with predictible movements and situations, and also the truth about sexual scenes described with courtesy and decence then read it, I don't care. But, If you take my recomendations: Don't read these books they are Boring!!!

The Deleted Summary edit

The movie happens alter some months since Dorothy CAME back to Kansas from oz in her first journey. Dorothy began to face sleep trouble and her aunt and uncle began to get worried, the night in which the movie begins Dorothy sees a shooting star, the next morning she checks the whole farm in order to find out if Billina had placed some eggs. When she is checking the pig’s eater Billina finds a key, Dorothy began to abrogate that is from oz and goes directly to her aunt in order to tell her so. But her aunt reminds her that they accorder “not to talk about oz,” because was Dorothy’s imagination. Aunt Emm takes Dorothy to the doctor the same afternoon, the doctor asks her about the Land of Oz, and then he gives back the key and explains Dorothy and aunt Emm about what they will do “to cheer Dorothy up.” The doctor wishes to cure her with electroshock therapy.

Dorothy stays for the night and so she is taken to her therapy appointment. But in the moment of initiation, the light runs out because of a thunder. The nurse, doctor and assistants go to check up the generator. Dorothy escapes with the help of a mysterious-nameless girl who untie. In a period of time the escapade became successful, until the nurse discovers both of them when they where going down the stairs. They run away and down the hill both of them fall into the lake, or river, whatever you like to call it. Anyway, the girl helps Dorothy to pull up a wooden box, while drowning. Dorothy makes it to save herself by getting in the box. The whole night she stood there. The next morning she is woken up by Billina, he hen (who really we never knew how it got there.) Dorothy soon finds out herself in oz, which she proves by demonstrating that Billina talked and that there where trees with some lunch peal trees growing on them (napkins as leafs). But, the emerald city and the whole Land of Oz is in trouble and everyone in the emerald city has been turned to stone, Dorothy sees a message on a wall, with red ink that said “BEWARE THE WHEELERS” Dorothy is then trapped by these famous wheelers, in an alley. They had wheels instead of hand and feet. When they trap her on the alley Dorothy desperately tries to find something that would help her to escape or open the wall. When she finds a keyhole she remembers the key, and so she use it to open up the wall, which was a door. Inside, she finds tick-tock, a mechanical man who served the royal army of oz. she reads the directions on the plate of his back and winds him up, “…DOES EVERYTHING BUT LIVE.” Tick-tock tells her what happened, he only knew that suddenly everyone turned to stone and the scarecrow was taken away. They make up a plan and escape from the wheelers, making one of them tot ell them what happened to the emerald city. He answers that it was the Gnome King, and if they wanted to know more about it they should go to see Princess Mombi. She direct Dorothy to a big hall next to her bedroom, there she owned 31 heads and they where all different and gorgeous. By taking Noº 4 she then explains to Dorothy. Mombi tells her that “…the Gnome king took the scarecrow and all the emeralds back to his mountain, and turned everyone else to stone.” She menaces Dorothy by taking off her head and looks her on the tower. There she meets jack, a pumpkin head character made out of sticks tied up with ropes and old cloths. He gives Dorothy the idea of using a powder of life, which brought him back to life before. Because, he was made by her mom in order to “scare that awful witch Mombi. First she was scared, but then she was angry.” In the middle of the night she comebacks for tick tock, who ran down and stood helpless to Dorothy. Meanwhile, Dorothy herself goes to the cabinet 31, which possessed Mombi’s original head and in it lays the powder of life and all her magical positions. Mombi used a key to open the cabinet when she took Dorothy to company her, Dorothy removed the ruby key and opened up the cabinet, unfortunately Mombi wakes up, because she woke up the 31st head, who then woke up all the heads. A green shadow in the mirror hall shows her the door to the right tower, when Dorothy comes back she sees herself in trouble. Tick-tock’s brain wind ran down and he began to make funny things instead of making the Gump, who was the one who helped them to escape. Dorothy sprinkles quickly the powder of life, but it seemed not to work, magical words should be mentioned, and I the instructions the words where written; when saying the words the gimp wakes up and then all of them escape triumphal. The next morning, they land abruptly in the gnome kings mountain, who soon invites them to play a game with him. Each one of them will have 3 guesses so they can find the scarecrow, if they guessed correctly the scarecrow would appear immediately and they could leave. Dorothy and the others accept, and one by one are eliminated from the ma, something that the gnome king never told: the consequence of loosing all the chances to guess would transform you into another ornament for his collection. Dorothy is left alone while tick tock is guessing; there the king reveals Dorothy that he owned the ruby slippers and that he used them to conquer the emerald city. Dorothy guesses right and saves the scarecrow, then the Gump, and finally jack. The gnome king gets angry, because, by making Dorothy to turn into a knickknack, he would became completely human. He locks Mombi on a cage, because she went to “warn him” about Dorothy. But clearly she got late and Dorothy was guessing when she arrived. Dorothy manages to destroy the gnome king with the help of Billina, she finally lays and egg, in the moment when jack was about to be ate by the king. The eggs where poison for the gnomes and soon the king dies, leaving behind the precious ruby slippers.

Dorothy picks them up and wishes for oz and the emerald city to be restored and for everything to go back to normal. She succeeds and then a party is made in her name. The Land of Oz wants her as her queen, but Dorothy refuses to the offer, because she needed to go back to Kansas. In that moment, by a miraculous which conceived by the slippers without hitting the hills, the same girl Dorothy met appears as a green shadow on her back at the mirror hall a wide mirror. But now se was dressed elegantly and with a tiara with two flowers on her head. Dorothy helps her to step out of the glass. The dancing girls, who where the persons Mombi took the heads from, reveal that she was Ozma, and that she was the queen and rightful ruler of oz. “her father, was the king of oz before the wizard came.” Mombi made her her slave, “but when the gnome king promised to Mombi 30 beautiful heads, if she kept in secret Ozma, she enchanted her on a mirror.” Dorothy wishes for Ozma to take her back home, and so she does. Dorothy is found by Toto and then told that the clinic was burned down in the storm and that the doctor died trying to save his machines. Dorothy sees Ozma the next morning on her mirror, by placing her hand and mentioning her name. Ozma tells her that she must be kept as a secret, and never told to her aunt and uncle about her. The movie ends when aunt suggest to Dorothy and Toto to be outdoors, because was a beautiful day.

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