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Examples of Featured and Good Articles edit
Wikipedia Project 2021 edit
Potential articles edit
Reasons for improvement edit
- The lead paragraph is too short, and the background information can be organized in different sections.
- One of the sections in the table of contents is actually empty and has no information. The popular culture section is very large and general; improvements can definitely be made. The historical context of the book and its story is too short and not informative enough.
- I think this article needs more information overall. The sections on the article, except for the first two, are too short and could potentially be rearranged to be combined sections with more useful information for the reader.
- There is very short and random sections on the document that could be combined to relate the information a bit better. The organizations and famous horticulturists are just lists and could be more descriptive.
- This article is very short and general. Its history and appearance section is full of random facts which could be arranged to flow better with one another throughout the document.