An article that I am interested in is the wikipedia page on Chris Andersen (basketball player). The first substantial edit on this page was added in 2006, May 30. If I had created this article first, I would have included an image, more citations and more technical basketball terms as much of it sounds based on opinions (some biased opinions). If I was the second reader, I would have edited it so that the terms used to describe his style of basketball is based more on professional judgement and add citations to quotes that describe Chris Andersen.