Good Articles vs. Needs Improvement

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  • Spelling of name is debated
  • Lead could be expanded
  • Order of topics is sufficient but could be tweaked
  • Crema Catalan heading could be made into a subheading
  • Necessity of ingredients list is questionable
  • Could benefit from some copyediting
  • Strong focus on Jews
  • Could benefit from a broader explanation
  • Strong focus on discrimination
  • Addition of concern towards maintaining culture could be added
  • Could benefit from some copyediting

Choosing Articles to Work on

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The following articles are my choices for possible projects.

Begin working!

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Write up the problem:

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  • Lead is not clear
  • Does not adequately summarize contents
  • Improper tone
  • Written like an opinion essay
  • Neutral point of view issues
  • Lack of citations
  • Structure
  • Long paragraphs
  • Headings are not clear
  • No images
  • See also section is lacking
  • Context is not provided
  • Jargon and technical wording

List your tasks:

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  • Ensure lead summarizes all of the content
  • Rewrite for tone
  • Use formal language
  • Correct to a neutral point of view
  • Mark instances that need citations
  • Improve structure
  • Shorten/break up paragraphs
  • Rename and organize headings
  • Group together similar content
  • Avoid redundancy across sections
  • Include images
  • Add articles to the See also section
  • Provide context for the subject
  • Use clear, precise, and accurate terms
  • Ensure past Talk posts have been taken into consideration
  • General copyediting

Write up the problem:

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  • Lead is not clear
  • Does not adequately summarize contents
  • Uses technical wording
  • Lack of citations
  • Structure
  • Organization is strange
  • Headings are not clear
  • Context is not provided
  • Jargon and technical wording

List your tasks:

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  • Clarify lead
  • Summarize all of the content
  • Simplify and explain technical language
  • Mark instances that need citations
  • Improve structure
  • Utilize structure from featured video game articles
  • Rename and organize headings
  • Group together similar content
  • Avoid redundancy across sections
  • Provide context
  • Use clear, precise, and accurate terms
  • Ensure past Talk posts have been taken into consideration
  • General copyediting