Some strengths of this article is that it gives the specs for the phone on the right side of the article and some weaknesses would be that it is missing a lot of information that could make the article stand out more. I could add more pictures to make the Note 8 more attractable. I could also add links to videos that can show the tutorial about the phone and its capabilities. I would add minor information about the Note 8 so that people can see what the phone is able to do. I want to add the different colors the phone is available in as well as the specifications of what the S Pen can do. Visit Samsung Galaxy Note 8 to see the edited article.
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