I'm trying to describe myself in an essay (this is my 2nd trial in writing). But apparently I've lacked with ideas. Could someone check this for me, please? Would you mind giving me more ideas in order to produce a better essay. I'll appreciate any help. 

I think my family tree is unique because I have a cross-cultural extended family. I have uncles and aunts (from my father side) with a different religious beliefs and cultures which are Christian, Buddhist, Hindu and Pagan. Therefore, we always had a great time gathering together especially when it comes to a festival and celebration days like on Eid Al-Fitr, this is a common situation in my country especially in my home town

I also love to watch Foot ball, listen to music or visiting to my sibling's house in my spare time. Other than that, I love to travel as well.

I took Psychology Counselling while I was in University. After I graduated, I love my job because it gives me a lot of experiences and shows me a different range of life backgrounds and human behaviors specifically for the youth. All these experiences are useful to myself and make me realize how I should be grateful for having a nice and loving family.

However, sometimes I've had a hard time since there are a lot of challenges as well. But even so, I've tried to look in a positive side, because I know dealing with human isn't an easy thing. In order to improve my work performance and myself, I believe there are still many things I have to learn, and need to strive for having a better life in the future.