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Article link: Housewife
Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
editThe part of housewives in the United Kingdom missed the latest information. There are introduction of housewives in different countries without Japan. In my opinion, Japan as a typical country with large percent of housewives, it's worth to be added.
Is the article neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
editThis article is neutral. There are not biased toward a particular position.Most of part are facts without many comments.
Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
editThey're not all right. I read the citation of prove that women usually work for pay throughout the history. But when i click into the passage. It just said the work-class family, women have to work during the Victorian.
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
editIn the education part, it said "the method, necessity, and extent of educating housewives has been debated ". This sentence require more explanation and evidence to support.