You will be compiling your bibliography and creating an outline of the changes you will make in this sandbox.
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As you gather the sources for your Wikipedia contribution, think about the following:
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Bibliography
editEdit this section to compile the bibliography for your Wikipedia assignment. Add the name and/or notes about what each source covers, then use the "Cite" button to generate the citation for that source.
Rural Health Disparities[1]
- This article comes from the rural health information hub, which is sponsored by the Health Resources and Services Administration of the Department of Health and Human Services, so it should be a reliable source.
- This article is a review of health disparities experienced by rural areas and the underlying factors contributing to these disparities.
About Rural Health[2]
- This is an article published by the CDC, so it should be a reliable source
- This article covers additional information regarding the worse health outcomes for rural health populations. It also contains information on how to address these issues
Global evidence on inequities in rural health protection[3]
- This report is published by the international labour organization, which is a peer-reviewed journal with an international lens. This should be a reliable source
- This source contains information on global rural health disparities, so it helps to make my information more global rather than just pertaining to US rural health
WHO Guideline on Health Workforce development, attraction, recruitment, and retention in rural and remote areas[4]
- This source is a guideline report from the WHO, so it should be a reliable
- This source provides more information regarding global health disparities and recommendations for rural populations, which will be helpful to provide more information regarding rural health on a global scale
Examples:
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References
edit- ^ "Rural Health Disparities Overview - Rural Health Information Hub". www.ruralhealthinfo.org. Retrieved 2024-03-17.
- ^ "About Rural Health | CSELS | Rural Health | CDC". www.cdc.gov. 2023-11-28. Retrieved 2024-03-17.
- ^ Scheil-Adlung, X. (2015-05-05). Global evidence on inequities in rural health protection. New data on rural deficits in health coverage for 174 countries (Report).
- ^ "WHO guideline on health workforce development, attraction, recruitment and retention in rural and remote areas: web annexes". World Health Organization. 2021.
Outline of proposed changes
editClick on the edit button to draft your outline.
My first edits to this page will be regarding the lead section. There are several instances that could use citations or more clear/concise langauge. There also seems to be a content gap in the lead section, as the worse health outcomes of rural populations is not addressed.
The two sources presented above will be used to edit the second paragraph of the lead section. Some of the information in this paragraph is redundant or not relevant for the lead section. Additionally, some sentences are wordy or could use restructuring. I will simplify this paragraph to include information on the health disparities experienced by rural areas and the factors contributing to these disparities
Now that you have compiled a bibliography, it's time to plan out how you'll improve your assigned article.
In this section, write up a concise outline of how the sources you've identified will add relevant information to your chosen article. Be sure to discuss what content gap your additions tackle and how these additions will improve the article's quality. Consider other changes you'll make to the article, including possible deletions of irrelevant, outdated, or incorrect information, restructuring of the article to improve its readability or any other change you plan on making. This is your chance to really think about how your proposed additions will improve your chosen article and to vet your sources even further. Note: This is not a draft. This is an outline/plan where you can think about how the sources you've identified will fill in a content gap. |