User:Jugem Jugem 1945/Kat Calvin/Hailey720 Peer Review
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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
General info
edit- Whose work are you reviewing?
(Jugem Jugem 1945) Team Kat Calvin
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- User:DFloresVVC/Kat Calvin - Wikipedia
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
editArticle Strengths
edit- Neutral tone
- Proper spelling and grammar
- Good use of multiple sources
- Information is structured nicely
Areas of Opportunity
edit- The links at the bottom of the page need improvement when it comes to citing the dates and the web link
- Focus more on Kat Calvin's work within Black Girls Hack, Michelle in Training, Spread the Vote, and the Project ID Action Fund
- Maybe create a lead intro heading to present the person's biography
Overall
editI believe that team Kat Calvin did a good job at providing concise & neutral information to the sandbox draft/biography that thoroughly explains who she is. I enjoyed reading the information that was provided in the biography and how the information was broken down. The sources provided for the information helped support the team's credibility which made the strength of their article increase positively. The only main improvement that I would suggest for the biography is talking & focusing more on how Kat Calvin became the Co-Founder of these companies as well as what her job is within the companies that she works with, rather than just broadly touching on them!