User:Intelligentsium/Radu Budișteanu, Victor Gomoiu, Gheorghe N. Leon, Gheorghe Mihail, Constantin Nicolescu, Vasile Noveanu (1)

Radu Budișteanu, Victor Gomoiu, Gheorghe N. Leon, Gheorghe Mihail, Constantin Nicolescu, Vasile Noveanu

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• Radu Budișteanu
• Victor Gomoiu
• Gheorghe N. Leon
• Gheorghe Mihail
• Constantin Nicolescu
• Vasile Noveanu

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• ... that Leon, a Gigurtu cabinet member, died in prison under the Romanian communist regime, while his colleagues Gomoiu, Budișteanu, Noveanu, Mihail and Nicolescu survived detention?

• ALT1: ... that economist Gheorghe N. Leon, a Ion Gigurtu cabinet member, died in prison under the Romanian communist regime, while his government colleagues, surgeon Victor Gomoiu, Iron Guard activists Radu Budișteanu and Vasile Noveanu, as well as army generals Gheorghe Mihail and Constantin Nicolescu, survived detention?
• Reviewed: Dream Corp, LLC, Political globalization, Areca nut production in India, Melker Svärd Jacobsson, Fidlers Run, New York City FC 0–7 New York Red Bulls
• Comment: The ALT1 isn't really an alternate. The main hook is a condensation of ALT1 that meets the 200-character limit. However, I would think ALT1 might be accepted given the multiple nomination, but either would be fine with me.

Created by Biruitorul (talk). Self-nominated at 18:18, 2 June 2016 (UTC).

• ALT2: ... that economist and cabinet minister Gheorghe Leon died in a Communist Romanian prison while his government colleagues, surgeon Victor Gomoiu, Iron Guard activists Radu Budișteanu and Vasile Noveanu, and Generals Gheorghe Mihail and Constantin Nicolescu, survived detention?

I propose this as an alternative to ALT1 as I think it fits the character limit of 200 plus the extra bold links. EdChem (talk) 10:03, 5 June 2016 (UTC)

• I am going to pick up the review of this one now. Since it's a multi article review I will go over each article at a time and give feedback.  MPJ-US  01:39, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Gheorghe N. Leon

• New Enough
• Long enough
• Interesting hook
• Reliable sources
• No copyright violations.
• On the short side but past the limit and what is there is well written so this one passes the DYK criteria Y

Radu Budișteanu

• New Enough
• Long enough
• Interesting hook
• Reliable sources (I am going to partially AGF, the browser translator only did part of it)
• No copyright violations.
• The article looks like it's not citing the hook about his prison time, only his "re-education", the article really needs direct attribution for the hook. N

Victor Gomoiu,

• New Enough
• Long enough
• Interesting hook
• Reliable sources (I am going to partially AGF, the browser translator only did part of it)
• No copyright violations.
• Good to go on this one Y

Gheorghe Mihail,

• New Enough
• Long enough
• Interesting hook
• Reliable sources (AGF'ing this one)
• No copyright violations.
• Good to go on this one Y

Constantin Nicolescu

• New Enough
• Long enough
• Interesting hook
• Reliable sources (AGF'ing this one)
• No copyright violations.
• The imprisonment is not directly cited in the text, it is not cited until the following sentence. for DYK the hook needs a direct citation. N

Vasile Noveanu

• New Enough
• Long enough
• Interesting hook
• Reliable sources (AGF'ing this one)
• No copyright violations.
• The imprisonment is not directly cited in the text, it is not cited until the following sentence. for DYK the hook needs a direct citation. N

- @Biruitorul: - the citations on a couple of these need to be sorted out before it can be approved.  MPJ-US  02:10, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

• @MPJ-DK:, I appreciate the thorough review you've done here. I believe I've addressed your concerns: please see here, here and here. - Biruitorul ^Talk 17:19, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

• - Yes that covers it, good to go now @Biruitorul:. I like Alt2 best, it goes go beyond 200 characters but it' six DYKs so it's understandable.  MPJ-US  19:34, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Review of Vasile Noveanu

• Some issues found.
  • ✗ This article was not created or 5x expanded within the past 7 days. This article has been expanded from 1985 characters to 1985 chars of readable prose since 21:18, 01 June 2016 (UTC), a 1.00-fold expansion, 7940 short of a 5x expansion.
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 1985 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ The probability of copyright violation is 0.0%. (confirm)
    • Note to reviewers: There is low confidence in this automated metric, please manually verify that there is no copyright infringement or close paraphrasing. Note that this number may be inflated due to cited quotes and titles which do not constitute a copyright violation.

Review of Victor Gomoiu

• Some issues found.
  • ✗ This article was not created or 5x expanded within the past 7 days. This article has been expanded from 15318 characters to 15318 chars of readable prose since 11:40, 05 June 2016 (UTC), a 1.00-fold expansion, 61272 short of a 5x expansion.
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 15318 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ The probability of copyright violation is 0.0%. (confirm)
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Review of Gheorghe N. Leon

• Some issues found.
  • ✗ This article was not created or 5x expanded within the past 7 days. This article has been expanded from 2310 characters to 2306 chars of readable prose since 05:53, 01 June 2016 (UTC), a 1.00-fold expansion, 9244 short of a 5x expansion.
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 2306 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ The probability of copyright violation is 1.0%. (confirm)
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Review of Radu Budișteanu

• Some issues found.
  • ✗ This article was not created or 5x expanded within the past 7 days. This article has been expanded from 2716 characters to 2710 chars of readable prose since 06:27, 02 June 2016 (UTC), a 1.00-fold expansion, 10870 short of a 5x expansion.
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 2710 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ The probability of copyright violation is 0.0%. (confirm)
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Review of Gheorghe Mihail

• Some issues found.
  • ✗ This article was not created or 5x expanded within the past 7 days. This article has been expanded from 5570 characters to 5566 chars of readable prose since 05:52, 01 June 2016 (UTC), a 1.00-fold expansion, 22284 short of a 5x expansion.
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 5566 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ The probability of copyright violation is 0.0%. (confirm)
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Review of Constantin Nicolescu

• Some issues found.
  • ✗ This article was not created or 5x expanded within the past 7 days. This article has been expanded from 2049 characters to 2059 chars of readable prose since 20:37, 01 June 2016 (UTC), a 1.00-fold expansion, 8186 short of a 5x expansion.
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 2059 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ The probability of copyright violation is 0.0%. (confirm)
    • Note to reviewers: There is low confidence in this automated metric, please manually verify that there is no copyright infringement or close paraphrasing. Note that this number may be inflated due to cited quotes and titles which do not constitute a copyright violation.

General comments

• ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length for 6 nominations at 184 characters
• ✗ The hook ALT1 is too long at 319 characters
• ✓ The hook ALT2 is an appropriate length for 6 nominations at 278 characters
• ✓ This is Biruitorul's 82th nomination. 6 QPQ reviews of Template:Did you know nominations/Areca nut production in India,Template:Did you know nominations/Melker Svärd Jacobsson,Template:Did you know nominations/Fidlers Run,Template:Did you know nominations/Dream Corp, LLC,Template:Did you know nominations/New York City FC 0–7 New York Red Bulls,Template:Did you know nominations/Political globalization were performed for this nomination.

Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This does not constitute a full review. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 17:07, 20 June 2016 (UTC)