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User:Iadmc/(factsheet) Murder of Denise Amber Lee

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Basic facts and article issues

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  • Denise Amber Lee was murdered by Michael King on January 17, 2008; the crime followed his kidnapping and raping her earlier in the day.
    • Correct and easily sourced
  • Lee and several others had attempted to call for help through the 9-1-1 system but there was a lack of communication and the police and other emergency services arrived too late.
    • Correct and easily sourced but needs clarification (how was there a lack of communication?)
  • At least four 911 calls were made, one by Lee herself from her abductor's phone and one from a witness, Jane Kowalski, the latter giving a detailed account of events as they unfolded before her.
    • Actually five by five different callers including the victim.   Done in lead;   Not done in other sections (see below)
  • Particulars of the crime (see the subpages /The crime and /The Crime (Basic English rewrite)
    • Essentially correct but text needs a massive rewrite so it does not look like a witness statement but is rather an encyclopedic account of events
  • Particulars of the trial (see the subpage /The trial)
    • Ditto Particulars of the crime
  • The aftermath and parallel developments (see the subpage /The aftermath)
    • The facts need to be massively expansed upon: enormous amounts of work have been done both by the family and the authorities to address the various failings, In particular:
    1. Denise Amber Lee Act and potential further FL State Law
      • Former is voluntary; latter would seek to make certification and training mandatory for all 9-1-1 call takers and dispatchers in FL
      • New section needed to discuss these developments
    2. Denise Amber Lee Foundation
      • Clear but needs minor copyediting and rewording
    3. Sponsorship of same by Gulf Coast Community Foundation of Venice
      • Needs adding and citing as an important fact
    4. Parallel developments in other countries/states etc
      • Need looking into and adding if relevent. Eg, there was a similar situation in Australia recently
  • Denise Amber Lee bio
    • Nathaniel Alan Lee (but probably stick with Nathan Lee for now).   Done Rest needs minor expansion but fine for now
  • Photograph of Lee
    • In hand (need clarification of copyright procedures)
  • Michael King bio
    • Expand if possible
  • Photograph of King
    • Only to be added if Lee's photo is added and only then if deemed appropriate
  • Tags
    • OR tag was possibly correct at time of placement but made inaccurate now by the many new refs and ELs   Done refactored tag to include only {{cleanup}}
    • Cleanup is in hand
  • Orphaned article
    • Need to find other articles to link to this article
    • Possibilities include: articles on similar crimes, articles on similarly mishandled crimes, articles on similar bills, articles on authorities discussing similar situations and bills etc
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References

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  1. "HT DAL Act passed" - "'Denise Amber Lee Act' clears Senate". HeraldTribune. Thursday, April 24. Retrieved 1 March 2010. {{cite news}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
  2. "Denise Amber Lee Act" - "CS/SB 1694 - 911 Emergency Dispatchers [SPCC]". Florida House of Reprentatives. Retrieved 5 March 2010.
  3. "NBC-2 King sentence" - Brahney, Marisa (Dec 04, 2009). "Michael King sentenced to death". NBC-2 News Online. WorldNow and WBBH. Retrieved 1 March 2010. {{cite news}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
  4. "dateline transcript" - Murphy, Dennis (7 June 2008). "The detective's daughter (transcript of Dateline episode)". msnbc.com. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
  5. "HT on verdict" - Eckhart, Robert (August 28, 2009). "Michael King found guilty of first-degree murder of Denise Lee". Herald Tribune. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
  6. "CNN penalty" - O'Neill, Ann (28 August 2009). "Jury: Death for man who murdered cop's daughter". CNN.com. Cable News Network. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
  7. "UPI followup" - "Jury recommends death for kidnap, killing". UPI.com. United Press International, Inc. Sept. 4, 2009. Retrieved 1 March 2010. {{cite web}}: Check date values in: |date= (help)
  8. "HT breaking" - Staff Reporter (January 20, 2008). "Denise Amber Lee shot and tossed in a shallow grave". HeraldTribune. p. 3. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
  9. "911 dispatch" - Anon (February 19, 2009). "Denise Lee Kidnap-Murder". Dispatch Magazine On-line. Retrieved March 10, 2010.
  10. "MSC day two" - "An emotional day two in Michael King murder trial". WorldNow and WWSB. August 25, 2009. Retrieved 1 March 2010.
  11. "MSC 911" - Anon (25 August 2009). "911 call from woman who followed Michael King released". WorldNow and WWSB. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
  12. "HT Map" - McCarthy, Barry. "Map of crime scene". HeraldTribune.com. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
  13. "CNN 911" - O'Neill, Ann (28 August 2009). "Woman's frantic 911 call helps convict her killer". CNN.com. Cable News Network. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
  14. "HT jury" - Carroll, Scott (4 September 2009). "King should die, jury recommends". HeraldTribune. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
  15. "dateline timeline" - Anon (June 6, 2008). "Calls of distress". Dateline NBC. msnbc.com. Retrieved 7 March 2010.
  16. "ABC botched" - Avila, Jim (July 23, 2008). "Are Botched 911 Calls to Blame for Denise Lee's Death?". ABC News. ABC News Internet Ventures. pp. 1–4. Retrieved March 7, 2010. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)
  17. "SPT crime report" - Anton, Leonora LaPeter (April 18, 2008). "North Port mother died as deputies were left unaware". St. Petersburg Times. Retrieved March 8, 2010. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |coauthors= ignored (|author= suggested) (help)
  18. "ABC reform report" - Zak, Sarah (2010). "Murder victim's husband takes reform battle to the Senate". ABC (Scripps TV Station Group). Retrieved 2010-03-01.
  19. "NC7 911 bill" - Vasilinda, Mike (Feb 17, 2010). "Denise Amber Lee Act Clears Committee". News Channel 7. Gray Television, Inc. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  20. "NBC-2 911 bill" - Anon (Feb 16, 2010). "9-1-1 bill passes through first House committee". NBC-2 News Online. WorldNow and WBBH. Retrieved March 6, 2010.
  21. "CS/HB 355" - "CS/HB 355 - Public Safety Telecommunicators". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved 5 March 2010.
  22. "CS/SB 742" - "CS/SB 742 - Public Safety Telecommunicators/E911 [SPSC]". Florida House of Reprentatives. Retrieved 5 March 2010.
  23. "BH bill" - Bonfiglio, Jim (3 March 2010). "Support bill that requires 911 training". bradenton.com. Bradenton Herald. pp. 1–2. Retrieved 3 March 2010.
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Official websites and relevant blogs
Further reading
Direct links to relevant Statutes, Laws, Acts and Bills
Note - The following are all formatted in PDF
  • "HB 997". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "CS/HB 997". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "SB 1694". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "CS/SB 1694". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "Denise Amber Lee Act enrolled". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "HB 355". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "CS/HB 355". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "SB 742". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
  • "CS/SB 742". Florida House of Representatives. Retrieved March 5, 2010.
Removed because neither relevent nor current. Potential conflict of interest with participants in forum and poll, also, among other things
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