Article Evaluations:
Ailsa Mellon Bruce
-article begins with describing her mostly in relation to the men in her life
-only after describing her family life does the article move towards her donations and philanthropy
-not much is written about her personal life aside from marriage and children
-some of the works could be identified
-article could be split in biography then personal life
-identifies net worth of all family members, if possible, should identify her net worth
-only 2 references
-very little on talk page, but the article has been flagged for interest in multiple wikigroups
Rosalind Franklin:
-nice chronological order
-extensive biography
-talks about personal life after achievements
-talks about controversies after death
-clearly and quickly explains why she is notable and deserving of her page
-almost 300 citations and they appear to be consistent throughout the article
-extensive references and further reading
-listed as vital article
-discussion about religion in the lead paragraph - lead paragraph improvement team
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