User:Geo Swan/exploring close paraphrasing

I had some trouble understanding some of the positions taken in this discussion. I used this scratch page to express my confusion and the concerns arising from it.

a comment I made in the discussion was prepared here.

If I still think this is an issue I would like to keep this page -- in a collapsed form -- for reference. Geo Swan (talk) 19:42, 21 November 2011 (UTC)