Neutral writing edit
You make an excellent case for your viewpoint, but unfortunately unless you are a published author, we cannot incorporate your views in the article (see the Wikipedia:Original research policy). If, however, you are restating someone else's published views, we can include those.
Please rewrite the above, as a summary of a published author's point of view, and add it to the article. Be careful not to assert it as "fact", but as that author's POV. Thanks!
Links edit
Inside double brackets, put: