User:Deebdina/Qutbuddin Mosque/Hganaini Peer Review
![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
General info
edit- Whose work are you reviewing?
Deebdina
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Deebdina/Qutbuddin_Mosque?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
editThe Qutbuddin article is very informative and well-organized. The lead section is very easy to understand to a non expert. The author delves deeper into the topic and gives a coverage to the monument's architecture, patron and history.
The sources are clear and reliable, however, they need to be cited in Wikipedia's style. The author needs to use the "Cite" button and provide the link to the source. The article needs more images of the monument to make it easy to understand. Overall, the article is well structured and organized but it needs more Wikipedia's style citation and visuals.
Lead
editIt is easy to understand and very brief and informative.
Content
editIt needs Heading and Sub-heading, not bolding the titles. There are difference in the fonts' sizes, needs to be revised.
Tone and Balance
editIt was neutral and unbiased.
Sources and References
editThe author used reliable sources for this monument.
Organization
editThis article is very well-organized.
Images and Media
editThis article needs using more images of the Qutbuddin Mosque.