Clc352 (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)Article Evaluation (Hauling-out) Clc352 (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)-Everything appears to be relevant, but include citation as to where the other benefits of hauling-out were found. Clc352 (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)-Neutral, no bias prevalent. Clc352 (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)-Benefits/purpose are short and to the point. However, it mentions that haul-out sites and patterns vary among species. Maybe include some examples of species that show this behaviour, and explain their different patterns and/or sites. Clc352 (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)-This article is rated as Stub-Class and is low importance. It is part of the WikiProject Mammals. Clc352 (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2017 (UTC)-Feedback was left on Talk page. Possible topic 1
TA: This could be a good topic, provided you're able to find adequate literature on the subject.

Hauling-out include examples of hauling-out behaviour in different seal genera, how they differ based on location which seals use hauling out for different benefits http://research.library.mun.ca/8632/1/Moulton_ValerieD.pdf https://mun-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/primo_library/libweb/action/display.do?frbrVersion=5&tabs=detailsTab&ct=display&fn=search&doc=TN_doaj_soai_doaj_org_article_0be36ab1f00d4b5aaa0108235c936368&indx=7&recIds=TN_doaj_soai_doaj_org_article_0be36ab1f00d4b5aaa0108235c936368&recIdxs=6&elementId=6&renderMode=poppedOut&displayMode=full&frbrVersion=5&frbg=&&dscnt=0&scp.scps=scope%3A%2801MUN%29%2Cscope%3A%28CONTENTdm-MUN%29%2Cscope%3A%28Eprints-MUN%29%2Cprimo_central_multiple_fe&vid=01MUN&mode=Basic&srt=rank&tab=default_tab&dum=true&vl(freeText0)=hauling-out%20seals&dstmp=1507572912344 Possible topic 2
TA: This could also work, once more, provided there is enough published (and some recent) literature on the topic.
Bunting (animal behaviour) Possible topic 3 Phragmosis
TA: Another good potential topic, again, would need to make sure there is enough published literature.

expand on ant genera that pursue this behaviour- they use it as multiphase defense for the queen https://link-springer-com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/article/10.1007/PL00001774 https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3014660/ https://link-springer-com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/referencework/10.1007%2F978-1-4020-6359-6 define phragmosis in frogs, give examples of genera http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/doi/10.1017/S0952836904005953/abstract;jsessionid=C5BD434BED20F7FEE07E3AD236CD4CB5.f01t02 http://www.jstor.org.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/stable/1438060?sid=primo&origin=crossref http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/wol1/doi/10.1017/S0952836902001103/abstract


Clc352 (talk) 22:30, 17 October 2017 (UTC)I plan on expanding on the Hauling-out behaviour article. I plan to rewrite or reconstruct the lead section as an operational definition generalized for pinnipeds. I will further describe the behaviour in 3 different subsections: for walruses, weddell seals, and ringed seals. Below I will paste my articles and notes for the draft.

Clc352 (talk) 22:30, 17 October 2017 (UTC)WEDDELL SEALS http://mun-primo.hosted.exlibrisgroup.com/primo_library/libweb/action/display.do?frbrVersion=5&tabs=detailsTab&ct=display&fn=search&doc=TN_doaj_soai_doaj_org_article_df5dad221bb24eaa97ef8e6a3c2d10dd&indx=1&recIds=TN_doaj_soai_doaj_org_article_df5dad221bb24eaa97ef8e6a3c2d10dd&recIdxs=0&elementId=0&renderMode=poppedOut&displayMode=full&frbrVersion=5&frbg=&&dscnt=0&scp.scps=scope%3A%2801MUN%29%2Cscope%3A%28CONTENTdm-MUN%29%2Cscope%3A%28Eprints-MUN%29%2Cprimo_central_multiple_fe&mode=Basic&vid=01MUN&srt=rank&tab=default_tab&vl(freeText0)=bimodal%20winter%20haul-out%20patterns%20of%20adult%20weddell%20seals%20&dum=true&dstmp=1508173842215 • haul-out on land or ice to moult, feed young, rest, avoid predation, or for thermoregulation • affected by biological factors (e.g. sex or age) and physical factors (e.g. food availability) • changes in pinniped haul-out patterns can be afflicted by seasonal variation, shift from diurnal to nocturnal during southern autumn and winter (shift appears to be due to changes in physical environmental variables such as air temperature, wind speed, etc.) • Weddell seals are high latitude Antarctic inhabitants, they can haul out year round onto fast ice, pack ice or sea salt ice, or where they forage • foraging areas and haul-out regions for Weddell seals do not have to be geographically distant • two haul out types- short duration haul-outs (average 1.06 hours, majority nocturnal) and long duration haul-outs (average 10.82 hours both diurnal and nocturnal, diurnal haul-outs primarily completed by females) • Positive correlation between the haul-out duration and diving time prior to hauling-out in males • Moulting season (December through March) comes with an increase in haul-outs, enabling the seals to benefit from the increased sun radiation and temperature therefore decreasing the energetic cost of growing new hair. https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Mark_Hindell/publication/225139423_Influence_of_time_of_day_and_month_on_Weddell_seal_haul-out_patterns_at_the_Vestfold_Hills_Antarctica/links/004635175ce7bc99e9000000/Influence-of-time-of-day-and-month-on-Weddell-seal-haul-out-patterns-at-the-Vestfold-Hills-Antarctica.pdf • Haul-out activity of Weddell females is associated with the age of their pups, they remain hauled-out for longer periods of time prior to the pups starting to swim. • During moulting season, haul-out frequency drops and they rarely haul-out throughout the winter. http://www.nrcresearchpress.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/doi/pdf/10.1139/z83-273 • Female haul-outs are associated with the age of the pups. • During the first week following parturition, haul-out probability was high as the young have not yet started to swim. • Hauling-out decreased as the pups are weaned and mating begins again, as females will spend more time in the water.

WALRUSES http://www.nrcresearchpress.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/doi/abs/10.1139/Z09-098 • Sea ice is used for birthing, moulting, nursing, resting, foraging, avoiding predation • Amount of time spent hauled-out is correlated with these physiological requirements • Walruses use both sea ice and terrestrial sites for haul-outs, depending on the availability or access to foraging areas. • Sea ice haul-out sites provide shorter and more frequent foraging trips in comparison to terrestrial sites, where haul-outs are typically longer for more time consuming requirements (e.g. breeding, birthing) • Hauling-out is heavily influenced by weather factors (e.g. wind speed, temperature, and time of day), likely due to thermoregulatory requirements. • Haul-out frequency strongly correlates with wind speed, as walruses will typically avoid hauling-out during intense cold or high winds. • Haul-outs typically occur during the day, averaging from late morning to early evening. http://www.sciencedirect.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/science/article/pii/S1616504710001266/pdfft?md5=ff1e896a364b19884f133e8bd97659db&pid=1-s2.0-S1616504710001266-main.pdf • During female haul-outs onto sea ice, the males are likely to be seen defending the territory surrounding the female herd (e.g. during mate selection, more aggressive and territorial males are likely to be chosen as mates) http://www.int-res.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/abstracts/meps/v519/p251-263 • Pinnipeds haul out most during birthing, moulting, and nursing periods. • Walruses preferentially haul-out onto sea ice and haul-out on land only when the sea ice haul-out sites float too far from foraging sites. • Haul-out frequency is higher in periods of low wind and high temperatures, during afternoon or evening • Unsurprising maxima in the summer and minima in the winter, using terrestrial haul out sites during the summer when their sea ice sites are further from foraging grounds.

RINGED SEAL http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/doi/10.1111/j.1748-7692.2002.tb01026.x/epdf • Hauling-out occurs at any time during the year for ringed seals • Haul out time increased during the spring • Shorter haul-out times, averaging 3h year round but a minimum of 7h spent on the ice during the spring. (SMITH, T. G. 1973. Population dynamics of the ringed seal in the Canadian eastern Arctic. Fisheries Research Board of Canada Bulletin 181. 55 pp. ) • Diel haul-out activity, as seals spend more time hauled-out during the night. Ringed seals have a tendency to dive during daylight hours. https://link-springer-com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca/content/pdf/10.1007%2FBF00031827.pdf • herding behaviour is a notable difference in ringed-seal haul-outs (particularly in the Ladoga subspecies) • Also, the vocalizations of the seals are affected by hauling-out Clc352 (talk) 11:11, 18 October 2017 (UTC)The subsections I will be adding all have notable differences in their haul-out patterns. I feel these examples are necessary as this is quite a varied behaviour that cannot be understood by a generalized definition. Different physical and physiological factors affect pinnipeds depending on their species. Clc352 (talk) 11:11, 18 October 2017 (UTC)I will also be adding pictures to each subsection. I currently have a minimum of 2 references per species and plan to find more.
Clc352 (talk) 18:16, 30 October 2017 (UTC)Responding to Ce1734 peer review: Thank you for your feedback! You're very right about the excessive detail, there's portions of each example I should cut down now to avoid doing so. I did not put much thought into the introduction as I was spending more time focusing on my examples, that's my mistake! I will be redefining the term "hauling-out" in terms of a variety of pinnipeds rather than just harbour seals, as done in the article prior to this project. Also, I will be including the conditions/factors that influence hauling-out behaviour that I will further expand on in the subsections, kind of like a prelude. I appreciate your help!
Clc352 (talk) 18:19, 30 October 2017 (UTC)Responding to deondischer peer review: Thank you for you feedback! However, I am unsure if it was only the pre-existing stub that has been reviewed as there has been nothing left in my sandbox or on my talk page. Some comments/remarks regarding what I have written and collected in my sandbox would be helpful!