User:Celebrations18!/Monkeypox virus/CraftWyvern Peer Review

General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Celebrations18!

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Celebrations18!/Monkeypox_virus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Monkeypox

Evaluate the drafted changes

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The proposed additions to the monkeypox article seem to give much relevant, necessary information to the article. I am very impressed with the quality of writing. The content, tone, balance and sources seemed perfect. I would recommend staying away from starting sentences with "and, " but other than that I am in favor of the next stage of writing.