Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
General info
edit- Whose work are you reviewing?
Antmanking05
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- User:Antmanking05/Cura - Wikipedia
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Cura (mythology) - Wikipedia
Evaluate the drafted changes
editI couldn't provide any input on the sandbox draft since I couldn't locate one, and the material seemed to be empty. Except for the academic link, which is mentioned third in your bibliography, the material supplied in the links is limited and does not appear to be scholarly.
Although it was challenging for me to discover much information on Cura, the following links lead to resources that could be of use:
https://www.proquest.com/openview/73d6e4c578ef512a8159c2512d20df6b/1?pq-origsite=gscholar&cbl=18750&diss=y
https://www.taylorfrancis.com/chapters/edit/10.4324/9781351241779-3/cultural-crossings-care-julia-kristeva-marie-rose-moro-john-%C3%B8demark-eivind-engebretsen
How care holds humanity: the myth of Cura and theories of care | Medical Humanities (bmj.com)
Routledge Handbook of the Medical Humanities - Google Books
***Using the search term "Cura Roman Goddess of Care Mythology," I was able to find more articles.
I wish you well with your writing and hope that some of the information I gave you will be useful to you in your research.