The article I chose was "Avengers: Infinity War." Upon quickly reading the article, if I were to be the one to first create it, I would've mentioned how this movie's story line was mixture between it's continuation to the Marvel Cinematic Universe, in other words, to their latest movie Black Panther, but also to the Infinity War prelude comics. If I were the second reader of this article, I would edit the way the plot was written, adding more details of how and why it is Thanos, the protagonist of the story is in pursuit of said infinity stones, and the casualties the Avengers faced with his success.