Template talk:Did you know/National Park Travelers Club
Latest comment: 12 years ago by Casliber
National Park Travelers Club
edit- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:00, 2 September 2011 (UTC)
- ... that 19 members of the National Park Travelers Club have visited all 394 park units in the United States.
Created by Nationalparks (talk). Self nom at 23:14, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
Article contains a substantial amount of uncited content. DYK articles must have a minimum of one cite per paragraph, with the exception of lead sections and paragraphs summarizing other article content. Gatoclass (talk) 13:41, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
- I have added more references now. Nationalparks (talk) 15:39, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
- Most of the prose in the "Conventions" section is still uncited, as is the Annual Master Traveller Awards section. An additional problem is that the cited source doesn't support the hook. The hook says 19 members of the Club have visited all 394 sites, but the source only says 19 people have done so. Gatoclass (talk) 13:38, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- How about ALT1: that attendees of National Park Travelers Club conventions receive limited edition National Park Passport Stamps?
- Not exactly a very hooky article. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:56, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
- Now has more inline cites - I agree that neither of the above hooks grab me. I think something about what the 395 units actually are could be interesting - are they just national parks? How are they chosen or added? Something like that. Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:16, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that members of a club earn a special platinum prize for visiting 395 places in the US?
- Hmm? Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:13, 1 September 2011 (UTC)
- Now has more inline cites - I agree that neither of the above hooks grab me. I think something about what the 395 units actually are could be interesting - are they just national parks? How are they chosen or added? Something like that. Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:16, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
- Most of the prose in the "Conventions" section is still uncited, as is the Annual Master Traveller Awards section. An additional problem is that the cited source doesn't support the hook. The hook says 19 members of the Club have visited all 394 sites, but the source only says 19 people have done so. Gatoclass (talk) 13:38, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
