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"In this organization, worked alongside noted suffragists such as Gail Laughlin and Sperry's daughter Dr. Mary Austin Sperry."

In this line the word "she" should be added before "worked".

"In 1905 she presided over a major suffage convention on Sutter Street in San Francisco."

A comma is needed after 1905 and suffrage is spelled incorrectly.

The article does a good job of citing its claims; however, there are a few grammatical errors present. Editor0904 (talk) 03:49, 28 September 2023 (UTC)