- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:44, 25 December 2015 (UTC)
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Zhang Qinqiu edit
Zhang Qinqiu
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that Zhang Qinqiu (pictured), considered the only woman general of the Chinese Red Army, committed suicide during the Cultural Revolution, as did her ex-husband and daughter?
- ALT1: ... that Zhang Qinqiu (pictured) is considered the only woman general of the Chinese Red Army?
- ALT2: ... that as Director of the General Political Department of the Fourth Front Army, Zhang Qinqiu (pictured) held the highest war-time position of a woman in the Chinese Workers' and Peasants' Red Army?
Created by Zanhe (talk) and Zee money (talk). Nominated by Zanhe (talk) at 12:47, 26 November 2015 (UTC).
- I added ALT1, I think that part by itself is better as a hook. TaylorMoore2 (talk) 22:13, 16 December 2015 (UTC)
- I've added ALT2; ALT1 has a non-English source and can be used if someone will confirm it. I would support either of those over the original hook. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 04:06, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
, New enough, long enough, nominated on time, reasonably cited, neutral, no obvious copyvios. I would oppose the original hook as overly negative, regarding ALT1 and ALT2 hooks, see above. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk • contribs) 04:19, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
New reviewer needed to check the two ALT hooks, since neither has been approved, and the previous reviewer proposed ALT2. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:10, 18 December 2015 (UTC)
The link in the article to the first source was dead, but I was able to find it in Wayback and Google translate confirms the hook fact for ALT1. At 79 char, well under character maximum. I was also able to confirm the hook fact for ALT2. Though there are not page numbers for the source, the confirmation occurs on the page labeled Chapter 14. 189 char is also under maximum. Did not re-review items checked by prior reviewer. Photo per commons is in the Public Domain. SusunW (talk) 06:31, 20 December 2015 (UTC)
