Template:Did you know nominations/Zaki Khan

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The result was: rejected by Allen3 talk 14:59, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
Insufficient progress toward resolving outstanding issues

Zaki Khan

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  • ... that Zaki Khan, a Persian general and aspiring Shah, went so far in his atrocities that his own men murdered him?

Created by Susuman77 (talk). Self nominated at 21:54, 28 July 2013 (UTC).

  • Comment. If this is your first DYK submission Susuman77 you do not need a QPQ review (#5). However, your question about an alternative hook at Mogiła Abbey has been answered. Thanks in advance, Poeticbent talk 15:15, 30 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Hi Susaman, the article is long enough and detailed enough. Its a good summary of the history (although I had/ve no knowledge of this bit of history). The problem is that DYK has a rule that at least every paragraph needs a reference. This reference should ideally include the page number, but I think this is only essential for contentious facts and for the atrocities you mention in the hook. Actually there is little detail of what/when/how/where these atrocities happened. Could there be some more detail? I hope this helps. Do not worry you have a few days to achieve this. Do ask if you need help or feel that you are being asked to do anything unreasonable. best Victuallers (talk) 11:44, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Two-and-a-half weeks since nominator notified of issues and no evidence of any efforts to correct problems. Nominators edit history shows a pattern of editing for a day or two and then disappearing for three to nine month stretches. With this pattern of behavior there is no reason to believe nominator will return and correct issues in a time frame acceptable to DYK. --Allen3 talk 12:02, 25 August 2013 (UTC)