Template:Did you know nominations/When Harry Met Santa

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 00:36, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

When Harry Met Santa

Created by AFreshStart (talk). Self-nominated at 09:20, 23 December 2021 (UTC).

  • Advertisements don't generally make me cry, but this one did when I first watched it. New enough, sourced and neutral, hook is ok, no image. I would love to see just a bit more length/substance in the article in order for it to run on DYK – breaking out a lede or sectionating could accomplish that, or just adding a bit more information. Feel free to ping me after doing that, or to request a re-review. ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 05:52, 27 December 2021 (UTC)
    • @Ezlev: Thank you! You and I are in the same boat there. I have added a brief summary of the ad and added some sections into the article – I hope this is better now. – AFreshStart (talk) 14:47, 27 December 2021 (UTC)
      • Much. Earwig check looks okay still. Good to go! ezlev (user/tlk/ctrbs) 17:37, 27 December 2021 (UTC)
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