Template:Did you know nominations/Vinohrady Cemetery
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 23:34, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
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Vinohrady Cemetery edit
- ... that the remains of two Presidents of Czechoslovakia are in Vinohrady Cemetery; one had a state funeral, the other's name was not put on his grave?
- Reviewed: Ice House Street
Created by Victuallers (talk). Self nominated at 13:28, 21 November 2013 (UTC).
Interesting article and hook. both text and hook are of adequate length. Adequately sourced except one item (non-critical) about the crematorium that did not tally with the citation given, cn tag added. I also changed Hácha's date of death to agree with citation and bio. -- Ohc ¡digame! 07:03, 25 November 2013 (UTC) Thanks for review and copy edit - I fixed the cn Victuallers (talk) 15:07, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
- The hook was a run-on sentence which I fixed by replacing a comma with a semicolon; if anyone prefers not to have a semicolon in the hook, it could be reworded to avoid it. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 22:20, 25 November 2013 (UTC)