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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:20, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
Vic Flowers edit
- ... that Jimmy Saville was once thrown out of the Adelaide Oval?
Created/expanded by The C of E (talk). Self nom at 18:33, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
The length, date and general sourcing for this article checks out, and the speedy was I think rightly declined, so no issue there. But the hook twists reality beyond what would be acceptable even on April Fool's day. It's merely that the man apparently looks a bit like broadcaster Jimmy Savile (note Savile, not Saville as in the hook), and he doesn't appear to even be called Jimmy Savile in jest, merely 'Jimmy'. I think we need another hook. Benea (talk) 09:31, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. How about this? The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk)
- Alt1... that Vic Flowers is considered as the unofficial leader of the Barmy Army?
Alt1 is good to go, though a minor point, I would write it as 'is considered the unofficial'. Benea (talk) 19:49, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
- Agreed. The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 15:10, 11 October 2011 (UTC)
