Template:Did you know nominations/Treaty of Louviers

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by ceradon (talk • contribs) 14:32, 20 February 2015 (UTC)

Treaty of Louviers edit

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... that Richard the Lionheart deliberately took church property without its permission?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Jane Eyre (1910 film)

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nominated at 11:57, 18 February 2015 (UTC).

DYK checklist template

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Passes DYK checklist. However, without affecting its DYK status, I would like to note that minor rewriting could improve the article. Example: "The region of where the manor of Andeli was in is now called Upper Normandy..." is a lot more easily understood as "The manor of Andeli is located in present-day Upper Normandy..." There are other awkward phrases in the article. Without intent to insult, I feel it is a shame to spoil the tale with such clumsiness.Georgejdorner (talk) 03:52, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for tick. Made the suggestion of "...manor of Adeli..." I'll continue copyediting and improving the article.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:49, 19 February 2015 (UTC)