- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:53, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
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Tom Oppé
edit- ... that Tom Oppé produced a report for the British government in 1974 recommending that babies be fed with breast milk rather than formula? Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Baby Driver
Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 09:27, 11 March 2019 (UTC).
New enough (created March 11), long enough (2,786 characters). On neutrality, the second line of the lead, "He is regarded as a pioneer in children's health services and infant nutrition" is not cited to anything in the article; I might suggest replacing with a line about the specifics of his work in pediatrics and perhaps mentioning that he was made a CBE for it. Article is well-cited and doesn't seem to be in violation of copyright. Hook is 140 characters long, cited to and in refs 4 and 5, and definitely interesting enough. I'd suggest linking formula in the hook to the infant formula. QPQ done. @97198: all that's needed is to address the neutrality concern. Best —Collint c 14:55, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
