Template:Did you know nominations/Tidepool sculpin
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 17:44, 11 November 2017 (UTC)
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Tidepool sculpin edit
- ... that the tidepool sculpin can leave the rock pool in which it lives, and breathe air?
- Reviewed: Phantom Blood
5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 06:34, 27 October 2017 (UTC).
Long enough. 5x prose expansion. Neutral tone. Reliable citations throughout. Hook is interesting. I suggest adding a comma before "and breathe air" as in "...in which it lives, and breathe air?" Other than that, looks good. GTG. Hybernator (talk) 23:41, 28 October 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks, comma added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:34, 29 October 2017 (UTC)
