Template:Did you know nominations/This Is Football 2002

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:30, 22 January 2019 (UTC)

This Is Football 2002 edit

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... that This Is Football 2002 was unique as football game as it allowed players to deliberately dive? Source: BBC

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Converted from a redirect by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 06:21, 2 January 2019 (UTC).

New – created January 2 from a redirect.
Long enough – the prose portion is 1760 characters
Within policy – article presents facts in a neutral way and without peacock terms.
Article cites seven sources with inline citations
Earwig detector: "Unlikely 2%"
Hook Format – fewer than 200 characters and is formatted correctly.
Hook Content - while factually accurate, not particularly interesting to someone like me who doesn't really know what "deliberately diving" means. I would prefer to see something more interesting to a broad audience.
QPQ - completed

Have another go with writing a hook. This one is fine, but I feel like there's more interesting information you could share with the Wiki community. Once you get back to me I'll make a final comment about the hook.--Coin945 (talk) 00:25, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

I disagree @Coin945:, I feel the hook is broad as it is covering gaming and football in the same hook in addition to people not into sport wondering what sort of diving. Plus there is a reason why I linked deliberate dive (normally I never wikilink anything but the target article in a hook) and ot was just for that reason so people can see what is meant by it. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 20:12, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

Okay, having read your comments I believe the hook is fine.--Coin945 (talk) 22:32, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

--Coin945 (talk) 22:32, 10 January 2019 (UTC)