Template:Did you know nominations/The Last of Us: American Dreams
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The result was: promoted by Gilderien Chat|List of good deeds 20:14, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
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The Last of Us: American Dreams edit
... that the first issue of The Last of Us: American Dreams sold out, and the resulting high demand led to a reprinting?
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... that the art style of The Last of Us: American Dreams was described as being "expressive and relaxed"? - ALT2:... that the Mortal Kombat series inspired a character in The Last of Us: American Dreams?
- Reviewed: Mother's Mercy
- Comment: Hook source, ALT1 source, ALT2 source
- ALT1:
5x expanded by Rhain1999 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:11, 28 June 2015 (UTC).
ALT2 gtg. 5x (28th), long enough, neutral, some close paraphrasing to clean up via spot check ("the ideal character to focus on in"), QPQ done. Struck main as not being very hook-y (many things are reprinted due to demand—what was exceptional about it?) Also struck ALT1 as we'd want to know who said that, as anyone could have, and that it was from SciFiNow doesn't make the hook very interesting. ALT2 is good, though, and checks out in the source. I edited it for copy, but the WP page should clarify that characters didn't inspire Angel Knives but the series or its style, right? Some things to fix in the article: "stoke", explain "the Infected" or replace with non-jargon, and the first ¶ could use some tightening (namely it can be shorter and reduce redundancy on how they collaborated). Good work – czar 13:37, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, and feedback. I expected this article to have quite a few errors; while I usually spend weeks or months writing articles (studying the source material, tracking down references, crafting and reviewing the article, etc.), my work on American Dreams took place over a few hours. Not to mention it's my first comic article. Thanks again! -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 22:50, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
- – czar 02:46, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, and feedback. I expected this article to have quite a few errors; while I usually spend weeks or months writing articles (studying the source material, tracking down references, crafting and reviewing the article, etc.), my work on American Dreams took place over a few hours. Not to mention it's my first comic article. Thanks again! -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 22:50, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
